Unit 2 Poems Section Ⅳ Writing 写作指导 一、佳作展示与背诵 英语中“please”, “thank you”,“sorry”等礼貌用语具有增进友谊、改善关系、化解矛盾等神奇的力量,因而被称为“magic words”。请以“Magic Power of Polite Words”为题写一篇100词左右的英语作文。体裁不限(叙述文、议论文、说明文……)。 Magic Power of Polite Words We use magic words in our daily life without realizing it.These magic words,for instance “please” “thank you” “sorry”,can add laughter to our life. Magic words can help build friendship.They make you polite and easier to get along with,thus strengthening the relationship between you and others.Once you offend someone else,you can as well use these words.A word such as “sorry” will make him less annoyed. Try using polite words every now and then.Once you do,you will never find yourself drained of energy for life.You use polite words,and in return,these words will provide you with magic power. 二、思路点拨 首先确定好这篇文章的体裁,根据所提供的信息,写成议论文相对容易一些。 议论文的结构一般有引子、正文和结论句三部分。一般在引子部分提出论点,即文章的主题。在正文部分摆出有利的事实,对论点进行严密地论证,最后根据前面的论证得出结论。 就这篇文章来说,在文章的第一段首先确定出论点,即“please” ,“thank you”,“sorry”等礼貌用语在生活中有神奇的力量。 第二段是正文,主要写magic words的具体作用,可以列举生活的实例,并且注意句子之间的逻辑性。 第三段写结论。号召大家在生活中多用这些magic words。 三、经典句式 1.These magic words,for instance “please” “thank you” “sorry”,can add laughter to our life.这句话的精彩之处是使用了for instance,使得主语的内容更为翔实,结构更高级。此外,句中还用了短语add... to。 2.They make you polite and easier to get along with,thus strengthening the relationship between you and others.句中thus之后的现在分词作结果状语,表现出对语法较好的驾驭能力。 3.You use polite words,and in return,these words will provide you with magic power.句中的in return使得前后句子内容连贯,逻辑性强。
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